Please Critique my Yu-Gi-Oh Advanced Format Deck. Is it good?

Well, let's start with the problem of 7 (seven) tribute monsters. That's a bad thing. Take out Hade-hane, summoned skull, the Evil hero, Draconic knight and mist archfiend, and replace them all with a monarch or Jinzo, but preferably a monarch. I'd hate to say it, but this deck kinda sucks in general. You need to remove one MST and raigeki break, put in at least 1 tuner monster and grab a corresponding synchro. Princess of tsurugi needs to be taken out and replaced with gene-warped warwolf. The rest are okay, but don't expect to win too many tournaments. My friend, short of completely re-making you a deck, this is the best I can do for you, so good luck, and happy dueling! ^_^